Honestly? I think this is absolutely adorable. A simple sleeping form, yet amazing. The only things that i would change about it would be to make the bangs a little longer (have them line up with the eyes?) and shortening the ears (by at least half the ear length you currently have) to make it a little more proportionate to the MLP plush trend. I like the way the feet are, but i dont know if they would look better with a more circular form for the underhoof. I'm looking at the other deviations of sleeping pony plushes in the plush pony group and they seem a little more "fuller" in a sence... but i really like the simplicity at the same time. Not sure, just really wanted to do a critique.. Hope this helps! Derpy is the best pony. ;D
Derpy plush. Want. Now for critique.... The vision you have for this is immediately eye catching, the way you have posed the plush is both effective and adorable. Originality is also quite strong, mainly because of the eyes, or lack of for that matter. The closed eyes are an effective spin on the plushies we are all used to. Technique is good, though if there is one thing I will note, it's that from the pictures you've posted, the legs are bit too thin in comparison to the arms. Impact overall: An overly lethal amount of daaw, which is accomplished by a unique plush posed in the right ways. Overall, great plush
Derpy is the best pony. ;D
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